Most science fiction worlds fail because the writer explains them. You can tell within a page. Two scientists explain quantum drives to each other though they both already know. The seams show. The world feels like a museum exhibit with little placards. After 25 years of reading student manuscripts, here’s the rule: a believable world…
Most setting descriptions read like the writer paused the story to file a property report. “The room was large, with high ceilings and antique furniture.” We’ve all written it. It tells the reader nothing about the character experiencing it. The fix: filter every detail through your POV character’s emotional state. Whatever she notices should be…
After two years of editing(!) Dani’s and my new book, Writing Young Adult Fiction, is about to be published. As one of our fans, I’d like to extend this special pre-publication offer to you: get the Kindle book for just $2.99, or get it for free when you purchase the paperback. My favorite part of the book…
by Jo Anne Fontanilla Every story takes place at same point or points in space and in time. It is incumbent upon the writer of fiction to “place” his story in space and time, as early as possible in his narrative, so that you will begin making the proper associations with the setting. The setting…
by: Jo Anne Fontanilla Every story takes place at same point or points in space and in time. It is incumbent upon the writer of fiction to “place” his story in space and time, as early as possible in his narrative, so that you will begin making the proper associations with the setting. The setting…
by: Jo Anne Fontanilla Every story takes place at same point or points in space and in time. It is incumbent upon the writer of fiction to “place” his story in space and time, as early as possible in his narrative, so that you will begin making the proper associations with the setting. The setting…
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