A character says “I’m fine” after learning her sister got the promotion she wanted. She’s not fine. Every reader knows it. What earns their attention is whether she’ll keep pretending, and at what cost. That gap between what characters say and what they mean is subtext. Most first drafts collapse it. The writer wants to…
Cover a character’s name in your manuscript and read the line aloud. If you can’t tell who said it, you have a voice problem. Most characters in most drafts talk the same way. Same vocabulary, same sentence length, same rhythm. Swap the names and nothing changes. The dialogue moves plot information from A to B,…
Every dialogue tag does one job: identify the speaker. An action beat does everything else. “I’m fine,” she said. Reader hears the words.She poured the coffee without looking at him. “I’m fine.” Reader sees the lie. The action creates a second layer on top of the words. What a character does while talking reveals what…
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Dialogue can be a bit intimidating. All that punctuation. But it’s really not that complicated. The usual practice is to put dialogue in quotes and place an attribution after it, separated with a comma inside the closing quote mark. The attribution will not be capitalized, because it’s part of the same sentence: “Hello,” he said….
Great dialogue in a novel or screenplay is very different from ordinary conversation. In real conversations, people chatter endlessly and often boringly about nothing. But that’s not something you want to include in your novel! Dialogue in your novel is a form of conflict. As with all conflict, it serves one of two purposes. I…
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