Author: steve

Hollywood spent years unable to make The Princess Bride, and nobody doubted the story. Producers read William Goldman’s novel and said the same thing: great story, no handle. The book worked on the page. It refused the camera. The problem was the outer story. Goldman’s 1973 novel is wrapped in a conceit: the tale of…

Dramatic irony turns a secret the reader knows into a second current running through every scene.

In science fiction, a wholly original premise is not a gimmick. It is the engine. And there is a simple test of a great concept: how many scenes does it force that no other premise could? David Levithan’s Every Day passes the test better than almost anything on the shelf. The narrator, A, wakes each…

Craft talk sorts narrators into two bins: reliable and unreliable. Aza Holmes, the narrator of John Green’s Turtles All the Way Down, fits neither. She never lies to the reader. She is simply not the one driving. Aza’s OCD runs the narration itself. An intrusive thought loops verbatim in the middle of a scene. A…

Some of the strongest suspense in fiction comes from structure, not plot. John Green’s Looking for Alaska runs two devices at once, one pointed forward and one pointed back. The forward one is the countdown. Chapter headings count down to an unnamed event. One Hundred Thirty-Six Days Before. A Hundred Days Before. The reader has…

Craft books teach two ways to hide a secret: don’t tell it, or lie about it. The Blind Assassin does a third thing. It never lies, and it tells nearly everything. The structure does the hiding. Several strands braid through the book. An old woman’s memoir of a small-town childhood and a bad marriage. A…

The backstory is the story. Atwood runs two clocks: aftermath in the present, plot in the past. The zigzag is the tension.

Craft books love the epiphany. The flaw is established, the pressure builds, and one morning the protagonist sees the truth and changes. It’s a fine arc. It’s also not the only one. Some of the best character changes arrive without anyone seeing the light. The plot corners the character, and the change happens because there…

Mystery writers plant clues. That’s the deal; the reader is looking for them. But the technique doesn’t belong to the genre. Any novel can sow the seeds of a climax the reader never sees coming. The trick is what you disguise the seeds as. John Irving does it as well as anyone in The World…

Somewhere in your draft is a handshake, an answered phone, a key turning in a lock. Two seconds of story. And it’s eating two hundred words. Every scene runs on two clocks. Story time is what happens inside the world. Page time is how many words you spend on it. Readers don’t track the first…

Margaret. Trixie. Dolores. You just met three different women. A name is the first characterization your reader gets, and it happens before your character says a word. Era, class, region, what the parents hoped for. It all arrives packed into a couple of syllables. Dorothy is eighty. Dakota is twenty-five. Both names work; each one…

Plenty of nonfiction is beautifully researched and completely inert. The facts arrive in order. Nothing ever happens anywhere. Tracy Kidder has a test for this: can you see it happening, in a specific place, at a specific time? A room. An hour. Two people. If you can’t picture it, you’re not writing a scene. You’re…